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[官方发布] [批改网]关于批改网提示句子不规范的说明

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gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-9 14:34:58 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
批改网在分析句子的时候,采用的是与语料库对比的形式。一般提示句子有问题,说明在语料库中未发现此用法。
另外,我们没有给出具体的修改建议是因为有的老师说如果给出具体的修改建议一方面会限制学生思维的发散性,另一方面会影响学生自主学习的能力。所以,目前我们只提示不规范,不作出具体的修改建议啊。
    如其他同学也有类似的疑问,可以贴我啊,不过需要新建个帖子,这里我有时候直接忽略了啊。我会尽我最大的努力给各位同学做出解答。
    谢谢!

先针对以往的案例给大家做出相关的解释和说明:

以往案例:

1、句末没有标点,导致系统无法正常分析,所以报错。如下面的楼主报错:
http://bbs.pigai.org/data/attachment/forum/201301/15/101823yeaqyilsicmy3smq.jpg


【小编提示】这种情况,只需要在句末加上半角的句号就好。

2、句子缺少主句,系统找不到句子的主结构,所以报错,如下面楼主的报错:

http://bbs.pigai.org/data/attachment/forum/201301/15/103235372kjkj4g7epvlph.jpg

【小编提示】because是连词,不可能单独成句。这种只有从句,没有主句的情况,系统也会报错。

3、口语体用于书面体,导致系统报错,如下面的楼主报错:

http://bbs.pigai.org/data/attachment/forum/201301/15/102055bmbduzr5y68ge8f5.jpg
【小编提示】这种情况,要改成应用于书面体的句子,比如这句,去掉比较口语化的well即可。

4、乱敲空格,导致系统分析失误,如下面这个错误:

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【小编提示】电脑比较死脑筋,所以在用电脑提交作文的时候,一定要准确无误,要不然就会导致系统分析失误。

5、带格式的句子,导致系统不能正常识别句子的结构,如下面的楼主报错:

http://bbs.pigai.org/data/attachment/forum/201301/15/102540u4ee7p5jfeje5p87.jpg

【小编提示】很抱歉,批改网目前还不能识别带格式的文体,这些包括在句子中带括号、信尾等等文体,不过我们正在努力解决这类问题,希望大家谅解。





不带截图版分析:

第一句:because I was lazy to brush my teeth after eating, and then went to bed.
【1】首字母要大写
【2】一个句子有两个连词
修正后的句子:Because I was too lazy to brush my teeth, I went to bed immediately after dinner.

第二个句子:We have known the succeed belongs to the man who have a strong will, and nothing succeeds without a strong will
【1】词性有误
【2】句末某有标点
【3】代词用错了
修正后的句子:We know that success belongs to the man who have a strong will, and nobody succeeds without a strong will.

第三句:At first, I would choose the job I like and I think I would make a great process in that position , then if I cant' make it I would choose the job even I don't like , but I think I would not stay at that job for a long time I just do it for my life .
【1】全段句子标点太乱,且有缺失标点的情况
【2】make a great process应该是make great progress
【3】cant'拼错了
【4】if I cant' make it I 缺失标点
【5】stay at that job for a long time 中式表达,且缺失标点
【6】do it for my life中式表达

第四句:请问There is no person can deny the fact that the mobile phone makes our life more convenient indeed . 有什么语法错误吗?
【1】句子结构缺陷
这句话确实有语法错误,person 后少个引导词who, 应该改为 There is no person who can deny the fact that the mobile phone makes our life more convenient indeed . 改过后,我们系统就不出现“语法不规范错误提示了”。

第五句:However, they have a common feature is that they prepare what they should do in advance. 这句话 语法哪里不对?
【1】句子结构缺陷
这句话确实有语法错误, 应该把is 去掉,that 引导feature的同位语从句, However, they have a common feature that they prepare what they should do in advance. 改完后,系统就不会出现语法不规范错误提示了。

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think you so much!  发表于 2014-4-27 23:02
Maybe he does not have so much money that can not afford the tuition. 这句怎么改呢?  发表于 2014-3-31 13:13
He gives them too much freedom to make a strategic decision and no matter the decision is correct or not. 我想问下这个应该怎样改  发表于 2014-3-15 23:31
Would you bent your back to help him , or just went ahead ignore him? [句子错误] 本句语法不规范, 请问我该怎么改呢?  发表于 2014-3-10 20:50
1669771886 发表于 2012-4-9 14:34:59 | 显示全部楼层

请问这句怎么改?哪里不规范?

O(∩_∩)O哈哈~,沙发是我的啦
1669771886 于 2012-4-11 15:49 使用 抢沙发 抢夺本帖沙发

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坑  发表于 2014-4-13 14:18
liuwei 发表于 2012-4-9 16:41:22 | 显示全部楼层
回复 sdaujdxyzyx 的帖子

同学 目前批改网还不识别这种排比模式哦 希望批改网能带给你帮助哦  祝你学习进步

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嗯嗯  发表于 2014-4-13 14:18
  发表于 2013-4-21 10:07
lee110390 发表于 2012-4-9 21:24:42 | 显示全部楼层

求指导

Although I wasn't born in Zhengzhou, but I lived here almost 22 years, I witnessed the change and development in Zhengzhou, so I could say I was a totally "Zhengzhou Man", now I'm going to tell you something about Zhengzhou in my opinion.
请问这段话有什么语法错误?
When talk about someone's hometown, it always make people lost control of words, because it's too much to say about where a person born and grow.
请问这段话有什么语法错误?


另外,中原经济区怎么翻译比较好啊?

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The kid will have the fully excuse to mess around without being published. 怎么错了  发表于 2014-4-13 14:19
中原经济区 Central Plains Economic Region  发表于 2013-9-20 13:42
When talking about someone's hometown,that always makes people lose control of themselves,because there is too much to say where a person was born in and grew.  发表于 2013-9-20 13:40
Although I wasn't born in Zhengzhou,however,I has been living here for almost twenty-two years.I have witnessed the change and development in Zhengzhou,so I can say I am a totally "Zhengzhou Ma...   发表于 2013-9-20 13:14
  发表于 2013-4-21 10:07
liuwei 发表于 2012-4-10 08:57:16 | 显示全部楼层
回复 lee110390 的帖子

同学 批改网之所以没有给出修改建议是想留下空间让自己修改出的文章记忆更深刻哦
祝你学习进步!

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in the year of 1582, the French King Charles decided that the first day of New Year should be January 1st but not April 1st. 怎么缺失冠词了  发表于 2014-4-13 14:19
  发表于 2013-4-21 10:07
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-10 09:08:03 | 显示全部楼层
lee110390 发表于 2012-4-9 21:24 static/image/common/back.gif
Although I wasn't born in Zhengzhou, but I lived here almost 22 years, I witnessed the change and de ...

先光说这一句啊:
Although I wasn't born in Zhengzhou, but I lived here almost 22 years,
【1】although和but不能连用的啊。
【2】你犯了一种错误叫comma splice。怎么一直点逗号呢?一句话的结尾要用句末点号的呀
【3】你是一直住在郑州的吧,所以时态错了
【4】almost 22 years还是for almost 22 years?


额,剩下的,你自己再改改看啊
[批改网]关于批改网提示句子不规范的说明
http://bbs.pigai.org/forum-viewthread-tid-1944-fromuid-793.html

1468043667 发表于 2012-4-10 10:50:59 | 显示全部楼层
未命名.JPG 求解》》》》》》

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a lot of 用于书面语,lots of 用于口语,  发表于 2013-9-20 14:20
Every coin has two sides,and the most conspicuous problem is that some students who lack self-discipline aways spend a lot of time in sending the message and palying games by it.  发表于 2013-9-20 14:19
I think you ought to add "that" after the word "problem"...  发表于 2013-5-23 00:31
  发表于 2013-4-21 10:08
1152611108 发表于 2012-4-10 10:55:56 | 显示全部楼层

Then they want to be special, so they going after the fashion too. 哪里不对

Then they want to be special, so they going after the fashion too. 哪里不对了??

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Then they want to be special,so they go after the fashion too.  发表于 2013-9-20 14:34
  发表于 2013-4-21 10:08
1152611108 发表于 2012-4-10 10:58:04 | 显示全部楼层

It is universally acknowledged that an increasing number of people going after

It is universally acknowledged that an increasing number of people going after the fashion语法为什么错了?


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It is universally acknowledged that the number of people going after fashion increases.  发表于 2013-9-20 14:38
  发表于 2013-4-21 10:08
people后缺be动词are  发表于 2012-6-14 12:51
liuwei 发表于 2012-4-10 11:59:47 | 显示全部楼层
回复 1152611108 的帖子

同学  要考虑下标点符号和句子中的谓语哦,比如going after,希望对你有帮助

[批改网]关于批改网提示句子不规范的说明
http://bbs.pigai.org/forum-viewthread-tid-1944-fromuid-793.html

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  发表于 2013-4-21 10:08
liuwei 发表于 2012-4-10 17:54:33 | 显示全部楼层
回复 1152611108 的帖子

同学  一句话后面要记得加上句号哦,that后面的going after形式建议检查一下哦。
[批改网]关于批改网提示句子不规范的说明
http://bbs.pigai.org/forum-viewthread-tid-1944-fromuid-793.html

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  发表于 2013-4-21 10:08
382572453 发表于 2012-4-11 14:18:07 | 显示全部楼层
Although the government can get more land for developing from destroying the old buildings ,we might lose our cites' culture. 请问这句话怎么改啊?我这里说是有语法错误
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-11 16:17:46 | 显示全部楼层
382572453 发表于 2012-4-11 14:18 static/image/common/back.gif
Although the government can get more land for developing from destroying the old buildings ,we might ...

只改明显错误啊:
Although the government can get more land for developing by destroying the old buildings , we might lose our city's culture.

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  发表于 2013-4-21 10:08
291897425 发表于 2012-4-12 22:24:11 | 显示全部楼层
In brief,the mainly significance of the system is making use of the law to maintain promotion on economy.

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  发表于 2013-4-21 10:09
291897425 发表于 2012-4-12 22:27:28 | 显示全部楼层
2.6 In brief, the mainly significance of the system is making use of the law to maintain the promotion on economy. [教师点评]
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!   
好评 报错
[名词错误] on economy 冠词缺失   
好评 报错
[低频警示] maintain...promotion 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语   
好评 报错
[低频警示] the promotion on economy 在语料库中无匹配用法,疑似中式英语   
好评 报错
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...use 在语料库中出现过 3678 次   
use 前面的动词分布 , make 后面的名词分布do...use,cause...use
好评 报错
求解......我改了好多次...

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In brief,the main significance of the system is to make use of the law to keep the promotion for economy  发表于 2013-9-21 12:37
897094946 发表于 2012-4-12 22:42:50 | 显示全部楼层
回复 gaohuawei 的帖子

We can at anytime to share our feelings, photos and some experiences with them . 提示语法不规范,求解!

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We can share our feelings,photos and some experiences with them at anytime  发表于 2013-9-21 12:41
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-13 09:12:32 | 显示全部楼层
291897425 发表于 2012-4-12 22:27 static/image/common/back.gif
2.6 In brief, the mainly significance of the system is making use of the law to maintain the promoti ...

原句:In brief, the mainly significance of the system is making use of the law to maintain the promotion on economy.
【1】the mainly significance中mainly的词性错了,另外表示“主要意义”的时候,一般用major吧。
【2】 is making 为什么要用ing形式呢?不是to do形式表目的的么?
【3】请确认一下promotion的具体用法


建议改为:In brief, the major significance of the system is to make use of the law to make more room for economic growth.

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  发表于 2013-4-21 10:09
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-13 09:18:32 | 显示全部楼层
897094946 发表于 2012-4-12 22:42 static/image/common/back.gif
回复 gaohuawei 的帖子

We can at anytime to share our feelings, photos and some experiences with the ...

原句:We can at anytime to share our feelings, photos and some experiences with them . 提示语法不规范,求解!
【1】时间状语按照习惯应该放到句子最后啊
【2】can是情态动词,后面应该跟什么???
【3】experience再做“经验”讲的时候,是可数还是不可数???
【4】句末点号为什么要跟最后一个单词间有空格????
建议改为:We can share our feelings, photos and experience with them at anytime.

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  发表于 2013-4-21 10:09
erpeng00258 发表于 2012-4-13 11:15:13 | 显示全部楼层
回复 gaohuawei 的帖子

There are some reasons result of the situation: first of all, pirated products are great cheaper than genuine products, customers usually prefer choose the cheaper one. 有什么问题?求解
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-13 11:58:49 | 显示全部楼层
erpeng00258 发表于 2012-4-13 11:15 static/image/common/back.gif
回复 gaohuawei 的帖子

There are some reasons result of the situation: first of all, pirated product ...

原句:There are some reasons result of the situation: first of all, pirated products are great cheaper than genuine products, customers usually prefer choose the cheaper one. 有什么问题?求解
【1】result of the situation:应该是result in吧
【2】great cheaper:是不是应该是 much cheaper??
【3】句子和句子之间的点号不对
【4】prefer用法确认一下啊
【5】are...one??还是are...ones?

建议改为:There are some reasons result in the situation. First of all, pirated products are much cheaper than genuine products, so customers usually prefer to choose the cheaper ones.
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