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503530344 发表于 2012-4-13 13:20:58 | 显示全部楼层

这些语句这么改?

But we had better use it as few as we can in the library and don't disturb other readers.

    [教师点评]
  • [句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!





Some people consider using mobile phone in the library is a bad phenomenon.

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  • [低频警示] bad...phenomenon 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语

First, they think libraries are place for read books that make up of paper. [教师点评]
[低频警示] that make up of paper 在语料库中无匹配用法,疑似中式英语
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-13 17:06:13 | 显示全部楼层
503530344 发表于 2012-4-13 13:20 static/image/common/back.gif
But we had better use it as few as we can in the library and don't disturb other readers.

[教师点 ...

原句:But we had better use it as few as we can in the library and don't disturb other readers.
【1】use it as few as we can 嘛意思?
【2】and并列的成分的主语应该是we吧,那是不是应该改为we should not disturb...

Some people consider using mobile phone in the library is a bad phenomenon.
【1】为了避免头重脚轻的现象,建议采用It is a bad phenomenon that....
【2】低频预警是指在本族语中很少用到的表达 但不一定就是错的哦
在批改网的登陆首页下面有一个语料库词典选项 可以帮助你写出更多的地道英语哦
板牙 发表于 2012-4-13 20:43:29 | 显示全部楼层
503530344 发表于 2012-4-14 02:40:44 | 显示全部楼层
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o :)知道啦,谢谢
503530344 发表于 2012-4-14 02:45:59 | 显示全部楼层
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use it as few as we can 我原本想表达的意思是“尽我们的可能少用手机”
yl3414 发表于 2012-4-14 09:33:58 | 显示全部楼层

I can not solve this problem

Admittedly, some download on the Internet are not allowed, they may bring a lose to the writer of the essay.

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  • [句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!





yl3414 发表于 2012-4-14 09:35:20 | 显示全部楼层
Admittedly, some download on the Internet are not allowed, they may bring a lose to the writer of the essay. [教师点评]
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!   
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[学习提示] 易混词汇: allow, let, permit, leave, authorize 均含“让,允许”之意。   
allow: 普通用词,侧重听任、默许或不加阻止。在正式场合可用来表客气的请求。
let: 常用词,用于各种非正式场合,语气最弱,指允许或无力阻止某事,暗示漠不关心或听之任之。
permit: 正式用词,在多数场合可与allow换用,语义最强,指准许某人做某事,含权威或正式的意味。
leave: 侧重不加干涉。
authorize: 语气最强,指权威性的允许与认可。
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yl3414 发表于 2012-4-14 09:41:43 | 显示全部楼层
Admittedly, many of the download on the Internet are not allowed, which may bring a lose to the writer of the essay. [教师点评]
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!   
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[学习提示] 易混词汇: allow, let, permit, leave, authorize 均含“让,允许”之意。   
allow: 普通用词,侧重听任、默许或不加阻止。在正式场合可用来表客气的请求。
let: 常用词,用于各种非正式场合,语气最弱,指允许或无力阻止某事,暗示漠不关心或听之任之。
permit: 正式用词,在多数场合可与allow换用,语义最强,指准许某人做某事,含权威或正式的意味。
leave: 侧重不加干涉。
authorize: 语气最强,指权威性的允许与认可。
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2516415737 发表于 2012-4-14 16:22:16 | 显示全部楼层

请帮忙找出句子哪里不规范

It is illustrated in the pie charts that graduates' choices after graduation have experienced much change请帮忙找出句子哪里不规范

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It is illustrated in the pie charts that graduates' choices after graduation have been experienced much change  发表于 2013-9-21 13:18
beverly7615 发表于 2012-4-14 17:15:20 | 显示全部楼层
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似乎没发现有什么不规范
lee110390 发表于 2012-4-14 20:42:12 | 显示全部楼层
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thanks
lee110390 发表于 2012-4-14 20:43:14 | 显示全部楼层
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呵the same to u
280962752 发表于 2012-4-14 21:37:55 | 显示全部楼层

4.1 In retrospect, I realize that without my friends and teachers' help , I can't learn English so well , maybe that is reason why I can sit here and write this essay: To say thanks to them.
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!  
求指教、、、、、
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-14 21:57:03 | 显示全部楼层
yl3414 发表于 2012-4-14 09:35 static/image/common/back.gif
Admittedly, some download on the Internet are not allowed, they may bring a lose to the writer of th ...


原句:Admittedly, some download on the Internet are not allowed, they may bring a lose to the writer of the essay.
【1】Admittedly用的不错啊
【2】some download on the Internet are not allowed建议改为it is not allowed句型,避免头重脚轻。
【3】犯了comma splice的错误。应该是两句话
【4】bring a lose to中式表达了啊,可参考批改网登录首页右下方的语料库词典进行改正啊
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-14 22:06:55 | 显示全部楼层
280962752 发表于 2012-4-14 21:37 static/image/common/back.gif
4.1 In retrospect, I realize that without my friends and teachers' help , I can't learn English so  ...

原句:In retrospect, I realize that without my friends and teachers' help , I can't learn English so well , maybe that is reason why I can sit here and write this essay: To say thanks to them.

【1】In retrospect用的很不错呢
【2】In retrospect表示:thinking about a past event or situation,often with a different opinion of it from the one you had at the time. 所以说时态不准确啊
【3】maybe that is reason改为maybe that is the reason

建议整体改为:
In retrospect, I realized that I couldn't learn English well without the help from friends and teachers. The reason why I ........
板牙 发表于 2012-4-14 22:13:54 | 显示全部楼层
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应该是as few as possible 吧
板牙 发表于 2012-4-14 22:16:30 | 显示全部楼层
嗯嗯,准确率蛮高的,就是光指出不规范,不主动改出来~
板牙 发表于 2012-4-14 22:30:39 | 显示全部楼层
V5 努力学习中
609395386 发表于 2012-4-15 12:03:21 | 显示全部楼层

哪里错了呢

2.1 Some of people are considered that the Online Shopping is more convenience and quickly than the original shopping. [教师点评]
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!   
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[学习提示] 易混词汇: consider, think, believe, count, deem, reckon, regard 均含有“认为”之意。   
consider: 指经过考虑和观察后得出的结论。
think: 普通用词,指按照自己的意见提出看法。
believe: 通常指根据一定的证据,经思考后而认为属实。
count: 指作出判断后而得出的看法等。
deem: 正式用词,常用于法律、文学,强调作判断而不是思考。
reckon: 指对人或事作全面“权衡”,把各方面意见考虑进去后得出结论。
regard: 侧重凭外表或表面现象作判断。多强调观点。
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1119297751 发表于 2012-4-15 12:18:21 | 显示全部楼层

thanks

"Long preparation work is extremely important for success, but you should know this important first, so that inquest your wise. "
系统提示有语法错误,求各位大神指点迷津啊

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Long periods of preparation is extremely important for success,but you should know the importance first/firstly so as to request your wisdom.  发表于 2013-9-21 13:38
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