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[官方发布] [批改网]关于批改网提示句子不规范的说明

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280962752 发表于 2012-4-15 12:31:18 | 显示全部楼层
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muuumaaaaa
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-15 12:58:56 | 显示全部楼层
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呵呵,批改网的这些提示一般情况下都是对的啊。
根据自己学的语法知识耐心的改一下啊,相信自己~~~
自己改对了,就会印象特别深刻的啊,下次就不会犯错了,嘿嘿
很高兴能帮到你啊~


 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-15 13:01:55 | 显示全部楼层
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but you should know this important first, so that inquest your wise. 这句有问题啊
没看懂啥意思呢
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-15 13:06:47 | 显示全部楼层
609395386 发表于 2012-4-15 12:03 static/image/common/back.gif
2.1 Some of people are considered that the Online Shopping is more convenience and quickly than the  ...

原句:Some of people are considered that the Online Shopping is more convenience and quickly than the original shopping.
【1】are considered that???被动???
【2】more convenience 还是more convenient
【3】the original shopping中的original用词不当,用traditional 吧~~
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-15 13:17:37 | 显示全部楼层


502599886 发表于 2012-4-15 15:57:55 | 显示全部楼层
Second, Abraham Lincoln also tell us that only if we sharpen the axe can we get succeed, if you do not pay some sweat , there is no reason that you can be successful.
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!  

高手帮忙改改吧。。。

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Secondly,Abraham Lincoln also tell us that only if we sharpen the axe can we get successful,and if you do not pay some sweat,there is no reason why you can be successful.  发表于 2013-9-21 13:29
板牙 发表于 2012-4-15 20:57:45 | 显示全部楼层
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also tell us that 这个应该过去式
sweat是可数名词,不能用some修饰
还有,怎么用逗号隔开了两个句子,应该切断为两句
花开无痕 发表于 2012-4-16 00:02:02 | 显示全部楼层
老师,你好。我写了一句话,不知道哪里错误,麻烦老师帮忙指点一下。
With the development of society and technology, the phone would become safer and little.
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-16 11:31:04 | 显示全部楼层
zhouxingdong815 发表于 2012-4-16 00:02 static/image/common/back.gif
老师,你好。我写了一句话,不知道哪里错误,麻烦老师帮忙指点一下。
With the development of society and ...

前半句是对的啊,可是the phone would become safer and little.是不对的啊。不考虑语义,phone是可数的,little修饰不可数名词的吧,另外手机变得越来越小,也不是用little的吧
花开无痕 发表于 2012-4-21 23:05:24 | 显示全部楼层
受益了。谢谢老师E
542463891 发表于 2012-4-24 19:21:51 | 显示全部楼层
A national defense said: "The cycling with principals to go Cuihuashan is a very rare experience, so I learned a lot in the mountains , President Zheng share with us a lot of life experience, not only tells us how the scholarship is to tell us how to behave, how to be a good national defense, a good soldier. "老师帮我改一下吧

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and President Zheng shared a lot of experience with us that not only told us what the scholarship was and how to behave,how to be a good person and a good soldier  发表于 2013-9-21 13:59
A person from the Ministry of National Defense said: "The cycling with principals to go to CuiHua Mountain was a very experience,from which I learned a lot  发表于 2013-9-21 13:53
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-25 23:29:10 | 显示全部楼层
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是不是批改网对这一句提示句子不规范啊?
目前,批改网的系统对这种长句还是束手无策啊。
所以给你造成困扰了啊。
我才是乔布斯 发表于 2012-4-27 14:19:35 | 显示全部楼层
So once the understanding and interpreting have been taken, taking the humanities concern would be paramount.
这句话怎么改???

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头重脚轻的错误~  发表于 2012-4-27 14:20
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-27 14:21:25 | 显示全部楼层
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头重脚轻错误:
建议改为:
it is of paramount importance to take humanities concern.
我才是乔布斯 发表于 2012-4-27 14:39:38 | 显示全部楼层
Being married, now, is often dreaded for the loss of freedom it brings, but freedom is such a relative term for we are all slaves already to food and water among other things.

这个哪里有问题??

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for we are all slaves already to ~~  发表于 2012-4-27 14:40
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-27 14:40:08 | 显示全部楼层
xujing 发表于 2012-4-27 14:39 static/image/common/back.gif
Being married, now, is often dreaded for the loss of freedom it brings, but freedom is such a relati ...

more dynamic expression-- we are all enslaved by food and water
小纸片飞呀飞 发表于 2012-4-27 14:47:26 | 显示全部楼层
In our daily life, a lot of things is a success not to give up attitude such as learning, lose weight, and so on.

怎么错啦

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a success not to give up :因果关系用because  发表于 2012-4-27 14:51
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-27 14:48:07 | 显示全部楼层
limin 发表于 2012-4-27 14:47 static/image/common/back.gif
In our daily life, a lot of things is a success not to give up attitude such as learning, lose weigh ...

such as learning, lose weight到底用名词还是动词?
小纸片飞呀飞 发表于 2012-4-27 15:01:13 | 显示全部楼层
还有这句
If every thing we all give up easily, it is hard for us to become a man who is successful.
为什么错误

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句子顺序~  发表于 2012-4-27 15:01
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-27 15:02:27 | 显示全部楼层
limin 发表于 2012-4-27 15:01 static/image/common/back.gif
还有这句
If every thing we all give up easily, it is hard for us to become a man who is successful.  ...

中式英语,句子顺序错
If every thing we all give up easily---》if we give up things easily
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