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今夕何年良辰美景虚设 发表于 2012-4-27 15:14:26 | 显示全部楼层
We all know that insisting is a key word to success. 这个对么?

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a key word to success可以改为a key to success  发表于 2012-4-27 15:15
小纸片飞呀飞 发表于 2012-4-27 15:19:23 | 显示全部楼层
In this way, they may not do well in their study and be addicted to the Internet.
哪里需要改?

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and be addicted to是不是可改为 and will be addicted  发表于 2012-4-27 15:20
今夕何年良辰美景虚设 发表于 2012-4-27 15:26:59 | 显示全部楼层
Many things we should give up at the beginning.

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尽量按正常语序写  发表于 2012-4-27 15:27
小纸片飞呀飞 发表于 2012-4-27 17:07:50 | 显示全部楼层
If I will regret deeply for the rest life, acting as a selfish and arrogant idiot seems better.

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头重脚轻 it seems better to act as a ...  发表于 2012-4-27 17:08
板牙 发表于 2012-4-27 17:54:49 | 显示全部楼层
And the ways can vary from different occasions and from different goods or service the customers need.

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此处vary 用法不当。vary from different occasions 似乎把ways 和 occasions 对比,显然不妥。可说 vary from goods to goods .  发表于 2012-4-27 17:55
板牙 发表于 2012-4-27 17:57:02 | 显示全部楼层
To begin with, everyone has the right to manage their own life and die with dignity, since our lives are our own and we want to end it.

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and we want to end it. ---》if we want  发表于 2012-4-27 17:57
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-27 18:14:07 | 显示全部楼层
With the development of the Internet, home shopping becomes increasingly popular, most people like shopping online.

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这种类型的也是错的啊。把increasingly popular后面的逗号改为句号就对了啊~  发表于 2012-4-27 18:14
49737560 发表于 2012-4-27 21:26:15 | 显示全部楼层
Campus, the place that taking up the large proportion of time in students' life,should play important role in students' mental health   
哪里错了 谢谢
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-28 09:07:35 | 显示全部楼层
49737560 发表于 2012-4-27 21:26 static/image/common/back.gif
Campus, the place that taking up the large proportion of time in students' life,should play importan ...

原句:Campus, the place that taking up the large proportion of time in students' life,should play important role in students' mental health   
【1】句末点号不存在
【2】that&where的区别
【3】play important role--》play an important role

建议改为:Campus, the place where taking up the large proportion of students' time, should play an important role in students' mental health.
板牙 发表于 2012-4-28 09:40:17 | 显示全部楼层
The lack of a strong will and that is why quitting smoking failed.
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-28 09:40:55 | 显示全部楼层
yaoxizhen 发表于 2012-4-28 09:40 static/image/common/back.gif
The lack of a strong will and that is why quitting smoking failed.

There is structure problem here.                             The lack of a strong caused the failure of the man's smoking-quitting plan.
646321071 发表于 2012-4-29 19:07:35 | 显示全部楼层
In our country, so many families have the ability to finance their children's college education due to the policy that people can do student loans.
它说我这句话的due ... education无此搭配。 其实我是要用due to解释前面那整一句话的。请问我应如何修改?
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-29 19:18:58 | 显示全部楼层
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原句:In our country, so many families have the ability to finance their children's college education due to the policy that people can do student loans.
建议改为:In our country, due to the student loan policy, many families have the ability to afford their children's college education.
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-29 19:21:04 | 显示全部楼层
646321071 发表于 2012-4-29 19:07 static/image/common/back.gif
In our country, so many families have the ability to finance their children's college education due  ...

【1】due to的用法等于because of
【2】 finance用afford更好一些吧
【3】do...loan 没见过这个用法啊
只能靠猜测给你重写句子了啊~
836634839 发表于 2012-4-30 14:33:51 | 显示全部楼层
First and foremost, being unemployed or having a bad job can make people feel anxious, which make people be under pressure in a long time. 求高人指点哪里错了,谢谢。。。。。。
272658139 发表于 2012-4-30 15:23:42 | 显示全部楼层
As far as I am concerned, we are ought to know about cultures of different countries to make our intercultural communications become more successful. 怎么改?
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-4-30 21:16:21 | 显示全部楼层
272658139 发表于 2012-4-30 15:23 static/image/common/back.gif
As far as I am concerned, we are ought to know about cultures of different countries to make our int ...

属于句式杂糅了啊+语法错误。
原句:
As far as I am concerned, we are ought to know about cultures of different countries to make our intercultural communications become more successful.
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As far as I am concerned, we should know the cultures of different countries, which would make intercultural communications become more successful.
1286716189 发表于 2012-4-30 22:12:15 | 显示全部楼层
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1.1 The labor-day holiday is approaching, all of college students have to deal with the problem that how to spend the holiday meaningfully. [教师点评]
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查请问这怎么改   

393265453 发表于 2012-5-1 19:43:16 | 显示全部楼层
Consequently, the gender role exists by necessity, whether people like it or not.
请问,这句话有什么语法不规范啊?

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我想问一下the gender role exists by necessity,是什么意思啊?  发表于 2012-5-7 10:03
2369544722 发表于 2012-5-1 19:50:08 | 显示全部楼层
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请老师给我批改一下这篇作文,题目是:<welcome to our club>
as a college student.because of borning in China.speaking Chinese .it's our mother tongue .so we hardly communicate with other people in English.neverthless. we know it's used the wildest language.
if you know the west science.you must know about it and learn it.if you keep up with the tide of the times. you must stady it.and so on.however.at present it's seem that hard of students can use it in fluent . so to improve our Chinese students who are poor English.we creat the English club!in the club you can use different ways to improve poor English !such as you can communicate with our VIP in English and make friends with foreigners but using English to write e-mail to them.sometimes.you can invite them to our school or your home.we organise the VIP some quite place to discuss any topic in English it must improve your English by this way.
it's the best club that I have ever seen!so come on boys and girls!if you take an interest in it.become one of us. you just need take your ID-card.and student card to register!join us now!!!

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你好,我们不提供这样的服务哦,呵呵,我们只针对个别的错误和疑问给出解答。整篇修改可以提交我们的人工批改服务部~  发表于 2012-5-7 10:04
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