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2545823736 发表于 2012-5-6 10:38:05 | 显示全部楼层
强烈建议批改网针对句子语法不规范给出修改意见。我们碰到这种问题都很头疼,因为这种情况可能包含的错误太多了,根本就不知道哪里出了问题。

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呵呵,我们也有这样的考率,但是,有老师说给出具体的建议的话一方面限制了学生的思维,另一方面影响了学生的学习主动性,额~  发表于 2012-5-7 10:05
budian729 发表于 2012-5-6 14:47:20 | 显示全部楼层
As the combination of the sexes, marriage embodies women’s values and achievement. This principle we met in Jane Austen’s works obviously. With one after another vivid and significant story, Jane Austen’s works show us values on marriage of those women who live in 18th century to reveal women’s authentic unfavorable situation of their days and to probe into women’s means of livelihood at that time, which is against to the characteristic of idealizing love in the traditional novels and provides with social meaning. Among which the most classic example is Jane Austen’s views on marriage in Northanger Abbey, which was her earlier novel, but was not published until after her death, in 1817,along with persuasion. Since the flexuosity of publication of this novel, readers felt more hard-earned with it; also,what we have read is the content after author’s modification again and again.



改了很多次,还是说语法不规范,请指点。

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你好,我们不提供这样的服务哦,呵呵,我们只针对个别的错误和疑问给出解答。整篇修改可以提交我们的人工批改服务部~  发表于 2012-5-7 10:05
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-5-7 10:07:07 | 显示全部楼层
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建议你改为:Labor Day holiday is approaching. All of the college students may face a problem how they spend the holiday meaningfully.

句子和句子之间用句号啊~
719754259 发表于 2012-5-7 21:12:20 | 显示全部楼层
The influence seems to be minor,but the aggregate harm from a large number of marginally harm may be highly undesirable in the end-such as that drops of water can wear holes in stone. 哪里出错了?
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-5-8 09:01:32 | 显示全部楼层
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句式杂糅了啊。建议你切割为短句~
991921316 发表于 2012-5-9 15:37:04 | 显示全部楼层
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Nowadays, it has become a heated issue that college students have difficulty finding jobs, which have a big difference with what it used to be in the past that all of college students can find them satisfying jobs easily.哪里有语法不规范,怎改?
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-5-9 16:26:55 | 显示全部楼层
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句子太长,系统不识别了,建议你改为短句啊~
sqz18253593091 发表于 2012-5-12 17:14:06 | 显示全部楼层
老师:
您看下面的句子的语法错误在哪儿啊??
With the development of internet, blog has been becoming more and more popular recently, when many people choose to express their thoughts and feelings by blog.
1205363679 发表于 2012-5-12 19:42:03 | 显示全部楼层
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Although不能与but 连用~~
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-5-13 18:38:14 | 显示全部楼层
sqz18253593091 发表于 2012-5-12 17:14 static/image/common/back.gif
老师:
您看下面的句子的语法错误在哪儿啊??
With the development of internet, blog has been becoming ...

With the development of internet, blog has been becoming more and more popular recently, when many people choose to express their thoughts and feelings by blog.


建议你改为:With the development of the Internet, blog has been becoming more and more popular recently. Many people choose to express their thoughts and feelings by writing blogs.
522482536 发表于 2012-5-15 09:12:31 | 显示全部楼层
With the combined efforts we made, the world will be filled with love.
哪里错了,求解释
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-5-15 09:14:31 | 显示全部楼层
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系统提示的你是时态不对还是?
646321071 发表于 2012-5-16 00:21:05 | 显示全部楼层
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首先,谢谢你的指教。
其次,我想指出那个“finance”是作文题目给出的,我以为题目给出的这种用法会比较好所以才这样用。
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-5-16 09:26:24 | 显示全部楼层
646321071 发表于 2012-5-16 00:21 static/image/common/back.gif
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首先,谢谢你的指教。

呵呵,我没查到原帖中的内容啊。有点忘了我怎么改的了。
如果题目中关于finance的用法你不确定用的好或者不好,给你提供一个工具啊,在登录界面的右下角有个【语料库】词典~,这个能帮你忙啊,你可以试一下~
dolpham 发表于 2012-5-16 09:33:41 | 显示全部楼层
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As far as I am concerned, we should know the cultures of different countries, which would make intercultural communications become more successful.

管理员,这句话我觉得还是redundant了些

最后面make … become 为何不直接make …adj更好?
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-5-16 09:39:57 | 显示全部楼层
dolpham 发表于 2012-5-16 09:33 static/image/common/back.gif
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As far as I am concerned, we should know the cultures of different countries, ...

个人认为都可以啊,make sb. do和 make + adj 还有make +adj+to do
dolpham 发表于 2012-5-16 10:46:59 | 显示全部楼层
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make adj to do? make sth adj to do 吗?
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-5-16 10:50:27 | 显示全部楼层
dolpham 发表于 2012-5-16 10:46 static/image/common/back.gif
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make adj to do? make sth adj to do 吗?

其实make + sth. + adj. 已经是完整的动宾结构了,所以to do有两种作用:
1:补语(起补充说明作用),使得前面make。。。的动作易于理解。
2:目的状语,表明前面动作发生的目的。例如:make it delicious to eat 把饭做的香,是为了吃起来香。
O(∩_∩)O~
dolpham 发表于 2012-5-16 10:56:10 | 显示全部楼层
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嗯对的,这就是to do 的规则,感觉又回到了高中呢
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-5-16 11:02:24 | 显示全部楼层
dolpham 发表于 2012-5-16 10:56 static/image/common/back.gif
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嗯对的,这就是to do 的规则,感觉又回到了高中呢

哈哈,看来亲的英语不错呢。亲不会是老师吧?故意来试我们的吧~~O(∩_∩)O哈哈~
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