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 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-5-22 09:18:10 | 显示全部楼层
837380019 发表于 2012-5-21 21:50 static/image/common/back.gif
老师:
      请问Every corporate has its own culture , which may be the reason why we choose it.有什 ...

原句:Every corporate has its own culture , which may be the reason why we choose it.
corporate的词性是形容词啊,表示“团体的,共同的”应该用corporation~
756959464 发表于 2012-5-22 18:24:51 | 显示全部楼层
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going错了
837380019 发表于 2012-5-22 22:23:04 | 显示全部楼层
老师好:
The proper combination of imperative mood, interrogative mood and the "if " structure can make a sense of dialogue between the recruiter and the applicant。批改网提示不规范,interrogative mood 错误,应该怎么改呢   辛苦老师
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-5-23 09:25:44 | 显示全部楼层
837380019 发表于 2012-5-22 22:23 static/image/common/back.gif
老师好:
The proper combination of imperative mood, interrogative mood and the "if " structure can m ...

原句:The proper combination of imperative mood, interrogative mood and the "if " structure can make a sense of dialogue between the recruiter and the applicant。
【1】句末的标点应该是.而不是。
【2】另外,这个句子偏专业了啊,预料库中,这类资源没能及时收录。除了make a sense of dialogue 我没太理解以外,我觉得句子没啥问题啊~
xiaoyang0702 发表于 2012-5-24 12:42:12 | 显示全部楼层
可是我写一个职位申请信时,是有格式的,在批改网上一写,最后的结果都不存在这些格式了,怎么办,然后批改结果就说我是句子不规范
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-5-24 13:28:35 | 显示全部楼层
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批改网暂不支持格式的批改啊。要不你只把body部分放到内容框里进行批改啊。实在不行,要是内容不是很多的话,可以贴我们,帮你免费人工批改一下~
xiaoyang0702 发表于 2012-5-24 18:59:40 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢,For your reference only, I submit my resume and the resume will tell you more about my details. 这句话有问题吗,结果总说不规范。
837380019 发表于 2012-5-25 09:11:44 | 显示全部楼层
老师好:
      My grades on major subjects are excellent, which can prove my strong study capability.这句话总是低频提示   grades on major subjects低频  prove my strong study capability低频   应该怎么改呢  谢谢
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-5-25 09:20:35 | 显示全部楼层
xiaoyang0702 发表于 2012-5-24 18:59 static/image/common/back.gif
谢谢,For your reference only, I submit my resume and the resume will tell you more about my details ...

原句:For your reference only, I submit my resume and the resume will tell you more about my details.
感觉有点啰嗦了啊
建议你改为:I submit my resume which will provide you more details.That's only for your reference.
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-5-25 09:28:50 | 显示全部楼层
837380019 发表于 2012-5-25 09:11 static/image/common/back.gif
老师好:
      My grades on major subjects are excellent, which can prove my strong study capability ...

您好:
原句:My grades on major subjects are excellent, which can prove my strong study capability.
【1】用of表示所属关系比on更好
【2】strong study capability听起来就貌似很中式呢,prove的是capability,capability to study是不是更好一点呢?


建议你改为:The grades of my major subjects are excellent, which can prove capability to study.
774694171 发表于 2012-5-25 21:37:15 | 显示全部楼层
Countless people ultilize it to interpret their feelings and communicate with other people.
请问这句话哪里出错了?谢谢
774694171 发表于 2012-5-25 21:44:23 | 显示全部楼层
This phenomenas makes me pay more attention to the outcome it bringing.
这一句哪里错了呢?
774694171 发表于 2012-5-25 21:47:01 | 显示全部楼层
This phenomenas makes me pay more attention on the outcome it bringing.
这句话哪里错了呢?
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-5-25 23:47:21 | 显示全部楼层
774694171 发表于 2012-5-25 21:47 static/image/common/back.gif
This phenomenas makes me pay more attention on the outcome it bringing.
这句话哪里错了呢?

原句:
This phenomenas makes me pay more attention on the outcome it bringing.
【1】phenomena是 phenomenon的pl式,即复数形式,所以和前面的this和后面的makes都冲突了,建议改为phenomenon。
【2】pay more attention on---->pay more attention to 固定搭配掌握不牢
【3】 it bringing---->it brings 基础语法欠缺了~~~
477152509 发表于 2012-5-26 22:36:29 | 显示全部楼层
This can surely help him make a proper judgment on whether the interviewee is fit for the job or not.
980499706 发表于 2012-5-28 23:20:38 | 显示全部楼层
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麻烦问一下这句哪里不规范啊,谢谢额~~
Most recently, there are two opposite attitudes towards whether computer is harmful to students or not.
mutouniao521 发表于 2012-5-29 18:10:59 | 显示全部楼层
2.2 It is our duty to inherit and carry forward it. [教师点评]
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!   
求解~~~
656527737 发表于 2012-5-30 09:31:09 | 显示全部楼层
They think they have a right to choose to offer the seat or not.    错误在哪里?求指正
656527737 发表于 2012-5-30 09:35:36 | 显示全部楼层
They think they have the right to choose whether to provide the seat or not.
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-5-30 09:35:45 | 显示全部楼层
980499706 发表于 2012-5-28 23:20 static/image/common/back.gif
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麻烦问一下这句哪里不规范啊,谢谢额~~

亲,towards应该是介词的吧~~~
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