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 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-5-30 09:44:36 | 显示全部楼层
mutouniao521 发表于 2012-5-29 18:10 static/image/common/back.gif
2.2 It is our duty to inherit and carry forward it. [教师点评]
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!  ...

原句:
2.2 It is our duty to inherit and carry forward it. [教师点评]
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!   
求解~~~

【1】亲,语法岑冕来讲是没问题的啊
【2】但是carry forward it感觉不太和规矩,不知道你上下文啊,所以就贸然给你改为:
It is our duty to inherit and carry forward the traditions.
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-5-30 09:45:57 | 显示全部楼层
656527737 发表于 2012-5-30 09:31 http://bbs.pigai.org/static/image/common/back.gif
They think they have a right to choose to offer the seat or not.    错误在哪里?求指正


原句:
They think they have a right to choose to offer the seat or not.   

【1】有权做...have a right---》have the right
【2】choose本身就是选择的意思了和or not有语义重复,建议去掉啊

你在试试吧`hehe
1171372228 发表于 2012-6-2 17:29:11 | 显示全部楼层
Luxury items are followed by people crazily than before , the phenomenon of showing off their wealth , which is rarely seen in China without globalization . 帮我看下,谢谢
714517525 发表于 2012-6-2 22:12:17 | 显示全部楼层
In my opinion, we should not give up our own language to learn English well.怎么改啊
569164781 发表于 2012-6-5 22:53:53 | 显示全部楼层
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There has sprung up a heated debate as to whether university campus should be open to tourists.这个怎么改??
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-6-6 09:05:18 | 显示全部楼层
1171372228 发表于 2012-6-2 17:29 static/image/common/back.gif
Luxury items are followed by people crazily than before , the phenomenon of showing off their wealth ...

原句:Luxury items are followed by people crazily than before , the phenomenon of showing off their wealth , which is rarely seen in China without globalization .

【1】整句话的逻辑关系怎么我就看不懂呢。
【2】sth are followed by sb. 你想表达什么意思呢?是追逐么,建议改为主动态,并使用seek after
【3】把这个句子拆成两句话吧,要不which指代的太不明确了。
【4】without globalization 是嘛意思呀,直接被你秒杀了啊。

呵呵,你在改一下,然后贴出来,大家在一块看看啊~
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-6-6 09:08:13 | 显示全部楼层
714517525 发表于 2012-6-2 22:12 static/image/common/back.gif
In my opinion, we should not give up our own language to learn English well.怎么改啊

原句:In my opinion, we should not give up our own language to learn English well.

【1】其实整个句子到not give up our own language意思已经很明确了啊,为什么还要画蛇添足,加上to learn English well呢?
【2】如果你坚持要用,建议你加上一个转折连词but~

 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-6-6 09:38:08 | 显示全部楼层
569164781 发表于 2012-6-5 22:53 static/image/common/back.gif
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There has sprung up a heated debate as to whether university campus should be ...

原句:There has sprung up a heated debate as to whether university campus should be open to tourists.

【1】be open to ---》be opened to

然后,这句话,就没有毛病了啊,只是目前系统识别there be句型比较单一啊,系统智能识别there be,所以你可以尝试改为 there has been a.... 但是,你这句话是对的啊。

在正式文体中,某些表示存在、发生、出现、坐落等意义的不及物动词也可以与there连用,如:appear, seem, come, remain, exist, live, stand, lie, arise, enter, follow, occur, rise, grow, happen, belong, arrive, fly, flash, sail, pass, run, spring up, emerge等。如:

  There exist many ancient temples in the country. 那个国家有很多古老的寺庙。

  There lies a small village in the mountain.山里有个小村子。

  Once upon a time, there lived an old queer man in the city. 从前,城里住着个怪老头。

  There remains nothing more to be done. 没有什么别的事可做了。

  There followed the first world war. 接着就是第一次世界大战。

  There flashed through his mind the image of a heroic fighter.他的头脑中闪过英雄战士的形象。

  There sprang up a wild gale.突然刮起一阵狂风。

  偶尔也能见到there后接及物动词:

  There struck me a sudden idea. 突然我有了一个主意。

  如果句中的地点状语前移就可以省略there。 如:

  Behind the house (there) is a small river.

455312291 发表于 2012-6-7 18:40:09 | 显示全部楼层
:)感觉这个批改网真的不错。。
mutouniao521 发表于 2012-6-8 19:53:41 | 显示全部楼层
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谢啦谢啦~
1490374062 发表于 2012-6-14 12:49:27 | 显示全部楼层
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第二分句中so they 后面缺了谓语动词be(are)
july93wrj 发表于 2012-6-14 14:55:58 | 显示全部楼层
请问,这几句话老是说我有语法错,错在哪里呢?
  1.Nowadays, there is a growing trend that many young people spent their whole monthly salary for their daily life.               
2.Also, it's significant to have a foresight, people should save some money in case of emergency, only in this way we wouldn't be too anxious when faceing trouble .
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-6-14 15:05:07 | 显示全部楼层
july93wrj 发表于 2012-6-14 14:55 static/image/common/back.gif
请问,这几句话老是说我有语法错,错在哪里呢?
  1.Nowadays, there is a growing trend that many young ...

第一句。原句:
1.Nowadays, there is a growing trend that many young people spent their whole monthly salary for their daily life.     

【1】主句和从句的时态为嘛要不一样呢?
【2】salary本身就表示”按月发的薪水“所以monthly salary---salary
【3】spend 的用发为spend sth. in doing 或spend sth. on 这里你用错了啊~
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-6-14 15:06:30 | 显示全部楼层
Also, it's significant to have a foresight, people should save some money in case of emergency, only in this way we wouldn't be too anxious when faceing trouble .

你这句话是好几句话杂糅到一块了啊。英语中的句末点号为“.” 两个句子间要么有连词,要么有分号,要么是句号啊。~
297377234 发表于 2012-6-15 23:00:28 | 显示全部楼层
With the economy and society developing rapidly, people have far more opportunities to choose diversities of recreational activities, which enrich their life with laughter and relaxation, but also do harm to them in some degree.第一个伴随状语有错吗?
651934630 发表于 2012-6-18 22:06:59 | 显示全部楼层
Some people appreciate it, they think these can be valuable for children; But other disagree to it, they think it's terrible for a child.

老师, 请教下这句话这么改哦?
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-6-19 09:19:34 | 显示全部楼层
297377234 发表于 2012-6-15 23:00 static/image/common/back.gif
With the economy and society developing rapidly, people have far more opportunities to choose divers ...

原句:With the economy and society developing rapidly, people have far more opportunities to choose diversities of recreational activities, which enrich their life with laughter and relaxation, but also do harm to them in some degree.

【1】一般的with伴随状语是with the development of ...  不过,你这里用的这个伴随状语,语法上是没有问题的啊。
【2】have far more opportunities ---->have more opportunities
【3】which引导非限制性定语从句,这里应该指代前面的这句话吧,那谓语动词是不是应该用第三人称单数?
【4】去掉with laughter and relaxation
【5】not only... but also...是个句型啊,怎么只用but also呢?
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-6-19 09:23:41 | 显示全部楼层
651934630 发表于 2012-6-18 22:06 static/image/common/back.gif
Some people appreciate it, they think these can be valuable for children; But other disagree to it,  ...

原句:
Some people appreciate it, they think these can be valuable for children; But other disagree to it, they think it's terrible for a child.

【1】some...the other...后面的other掉了冠词了啊
【2】句子和句子之间要么有连接词或者分号,否则就要以句号结尾了啊。在some people 前面加一个though怎么样?
1261941212 发表于 2012-7-4 12:07:03 | 显示全部楼层
老师您好,请问这句有什么问题
Overall, road transported was always the most popular way for people, while the pipeline is the least prevailing way.
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-7-4 13:33:07 | 显示全部楼层
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呵呵,我先跟你确认一下你要表达的意思啊,你是要表达:
总而言之,公路运输是人们认可的最流行的方式,而使用铺设管道却不流行。
这个是你要表达的意思么?
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