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 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-7-4 13:34:08 | 显示全部楼层
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呵呵,这沙发抢的~
ganzi 发表于 2012-7-4 13:54:24 | 显示全部楼层
Besides, some students whose consuming has been beyond their regular expend.
这句话哪错了?
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-7-4 13:55:25 | 显示全部楼层
ganzi 发表于 2012-7-4 13:54 static/image/common/back.gif
Besides, some students whose consuming has been beyond their regular expend.
这句话哪错了?

consuming-----》monthly cost
板牙 发表于 2012-7-4 13:58:08 | 显示全部楼层
Not only does this habit break the law of normal work and rest, but also that will affect their daily life.
这句话有何不规范的地方?
板牙 发表于 2012-7-4 13:58:59 | 显示全部楼层
The Catcher in the Rye by the American writer Jerome David Salinger is the only saga novel of him but the most important literature works in American.
板牙 发表于 2012-7-4 13:59:23 | 显示全部楼层
Because now the college student is difficult to look for a job has become a social problem.
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-7-4 14:00:34 | 显示全部楼层
yaoxizhen 发表于 2012-7-4 13:58 static/image/common/back.gif
Not only does this habit break the law of normal work and rest, but also that will affect their dail ...

Not only does this habit break the law of normal work and rest, but also that will affect their daily life.


but also that will -------》but also will
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-7-4 14:01:13 | 显示全部楼层
yaoxizhen 发表于 2012-7-4 13:58 static/image/common/back.gif
The Catcher in the Rye by the American writer Jerome David Salinger is the only saga novel of him bu ...

The Catcher in the Rye by the American writer Jerome David Salinger is the only saga novel of him but the most important literature works in American.


works in American. -----》works in American.

 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-7-4 14:01:51 | 显示全部楼层
yaoxizhen 发表于 2012-7-4 13:59 static/image/common/back.gif
Because now the college student is difficult to look for a job has become a social problem.

原句:Because now the college student is difficult to look for a job has become a social problem.

语法错误。建议改为:Because now it is difficult for college student to look for a job, which has become a social problem.
板牙 发表于 2012-7-4 14:11:49 | 显示全部楼层
In recent years, college students discovered that it is difficult to find a job which has become a social problem.
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-7-4 14:12:27 | 显示全部楼层
yaoxizhen 发表于 2012-7-4 14:11 static/image/common/back.gif
In recent years, college students discovered that it is difficult to find a job which has become a s ...

语法错误. In recent years, college students discovered that it is difficult to find a job,  which has become a social problem.
1261941212 发表于 2012-7-5 19:10:21 | 显示全部楼层
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是的
1261941212 发表于 2012-7-5 19:34:15 | 显示全部楼层
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我想表达的意思是,总而言之,公路运输是人们认可的最流行的方式,而管道运输却是不流行的方式。
1261941212 发表于 2012-7-7 00:25:28 | 显示全部楼层
1.For instance, education is always a big problem in China, a huge of poor children unable to go to school to study, because their families have no capacity to afford the tuition fee, and they need to go to work to assist their family.
2.That is to say, people and government should pay more attention to this problem and spent more money on it, which let more poor children can go to school rather than on protecting animals.
3.Animals are human's best friends, if they go extinct, we also unable to live in the world alone.
老师您好,请问以上三句,为什么是不规范呢?
1261941212 发表于 2012-7-8 00:57:11 | 显示全部楼层
1、Last but not the least, in contemporary, people like travel aboard to enjoy their life and realize the culture of other counties. [教师点评]
[低频警示] realize...culture 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语   
好评 报错
[低频警示] the culture of other counties 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语   
好评 报错
2、If one country has good international relationship, people are will to travel there, which let more people deeply know the culture of it and approve its economy. [教师点评]
[低频警示] approve...economy 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语   
好评 报错
[低频警示] good international relationship 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语   
好评 报错
[低频警示] approve its economy 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语   
好评 报错
3、To sum up, the factors given above are reflect that good relationship is more and more important than before. [教师点评]
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!   
好评 报错
4、For another thing, the problems of environment are been pay more attention by all countries now. [教师点评]
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!   
好评 报错
5、More precisely, nowadays different countries will produce their specialize goods to export and import goods that they are scarce. [教师点评]
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!   
好评 报错
[低频警示] specialize...goods 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语   
好评 报错
  老师,,求解,,,
我快要考雅思了,作文就这水平,我也不知道怎么办。
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-7-9 09:57:59 | 显示全部楼层
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原句:Overall, road transported was always the most popular way for people, while the pipeline is the least prevailing way.
【1】Overall---》all in all 习惯用法
【2】建议采用it is considered that...句型
【3】公路运输,为什么要在transport后面加ed,用名词不久好了么?
【4】建议查一下pipeline的意思及用法啊~
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-7-9 10:00:14 | 显示全部楼层
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第一句:For instance, education is always a big problem in China, a huge of poor children unable to go to school to study, because their families have no capacity to afford the tuition fee, and they need to go to work to assist their family.

【1】 a huge of poor children unable to go to school to study 谓语动词去哪里呢?
【2】逗号不能连接完整的两个句子啊
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-7-9 10:03:23 | 显示全部楼层
1261941212 发表于 2012-7-7 00:25 static/image/common/back.gif
1.For instance, education is always a big problem in China, a huge of poor children unable to go to  ...

2. That is to say, people and government should pay more attention to this problem and spent more money on it, which let more poor children can go to school rather than on protecting animals.
【1】should用法,should后面应该跟动词原形 and spend~~~~
【2】后半句的意思,建议楼主,翻译出来看看啊,意思压根讲不通
【3】另外,which引导的非限定性定于从句,which指代的内容是什么,如果是整个句子?let是不是应该用第三人称单数?

 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-7-9 10:04:18 | 显示全部楼层
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.Animals are human's best friends, if they go extinct, we also unable to live in the world alone.
able不是动词,缺少谓语动词~
 楼主| gaohuawei 发表于 2012-7-9 10:06:10 | 显示全部楼层
1261941212 发表于 2012-7-8 00:57 static/image/common/back.gif
1、Last but not the least, in contemporary, people like travel aboard to enjoy their life and realiz ...

1. Last but not the least, in contemporary, people like travel aboard to enjoy their life and realize the culture of other counties. [教师点评]
【1】like用法~·like to do /like doing ~
【2】搭配错误 realize...culture是什么意思?
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