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1356953129 发表于 2016-4-26 13:14:29 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Spend much on job hunting is right?
With the development of science and technology, more and more students look for jobs are more difficult than the former. Undoubtedly, they pay much more money when they search for work. It's increasingly recognized by the general public that those who had receiver the good education may get the good job as they graduate. There is no doubt that students may get high income after they have worked for years. On coin has two sides, A majority of people think spending so much on finding job is ridiculous because it is helpless. Those who think it are necessary when they were in need of it.
In short, I cherish this idea that we should pay more attention what the company is in need of and what should we do. What's more, we have to intensify the ability of work. The significant part is how can you make your company have faith in how can you do the job better.




zhctrue 发表于 2016-4-26 14:24:28 | 显示全部楼层
Spend much on job hunting is right?
标题有误。这个句子里spend和is都是谓语动词,且没有主语,spend much on job hunting其实是要做is的主语,所以要吧spend改为spending,构成动名词短语。
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