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www.yujianni 发表于 2016-12-11 20:12:26 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
As the cartoon above depicts vividly, the first picture illustrates a boy who is study in home, and ,in the meanwhile , the presence of the expression on his face obviously displays that he is quite upset.However,at the same time his father is watching TV        delightedly.The most prominently remarkable feature in the second picture is that father is studying with his son and his son is very happy.
As is conveyed by the picture ,it is vital to embedding the awareness to set an excellent example for children,which need to be a good trend in contemporary society,and as a consequence the phenomenon can not be ignored and we should pay attention to it.Primarily,parents should know that they are best teachers of children.So parents should be careful of what you do in front of your children.Moreover,parents need to  create a good learning atmosphere.In this day and time just saying "just do it" is quite far from adequacy .Children need parents to teach them by example ,which is the most valid way.
Consequently,the most pressing matter of the moment is to help parents establish a correct outlook of education.In my humble opinion,mass media should popularize paradigm of education and bring people's attention to it. Additionally,cultivating social trends of encouraging the validity of children education is also significant.Of course,the most important thing is that parents need to learn how to do it.
milkmap 发表于 2017-2-1 16:54:31 | 显示全部楼层
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