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[2017年] 短文改错:I felt sadly yesterday when our teacher told us something abou...

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simplecen 发表于 2017-4-6 09:37:02 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
I felt sadly yesterday when our teacher told us something about Project Hope in class. It has set up to help the children in the countryside who can’t pay to go to school. After school I came home. I was wondering if I could do something for the Project then I caught sight of money-collecting box on the table. Then I made up my minds to send my pocket money which I had saved for nearly one year for the children who wanted to go to school. I wrote a letter to them and hurried to the post office.Together with the letter I posted the money and sent with my best wishes to them.
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1329111522 发表于 2017-4-7 09:20:30 | 显示全部楼层

RE: 短文改错:I felt sadly yesterday when our teacher told us something abou...

I felt sad yesterday when our teacher told us something about Project Hope in class.It has been set up to help the children in the countryside who can not pay tuition fee to go to school.On the way home after school,I was wondering if I could do something for the Project ,I would catch sight of money-collecting box on the table.Then I will make up my mind to send my pocket money that I have saved for nearly one year to the children who want to go to school.I  will write a letter to them and hurry to go to the post office.Together with the letter ,I will post the money and sent my best wishes to them.
593A5 发表于 2017-4-8 15:13:48 | 显示全部楼层
sadly——sad
9677729 发表于 2017-4-8 22:12:06 | 显示全部楼层
pay for going school 吗
A1E7D 发表于 2017-4-17 17:13:05 | 显示全部楼层
thank  you
CBDED 发表于 2017-4-23 11:44:59 | 显示全部楼层
哈哈哈哈哈哈
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