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jackwong_homan 发表于 2017-4-22 21:43:00 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Some people think we need more female leaders to create world peace and reduce violence. To what extent do you agree?

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Sexual equity is a common sense shared by the world in spite of the resistant existence of the phenomenon that the female is likely to be underprivileged in some places. However, with more and more female incumbents appear on TV shows, it is undeniable that femal will eventually be an indispensable part of the political pivot and make a significant contribution to our society. But a heated debate arises and centers on a question: is it true that the more female leaders we have, the more peaceful environment we have?

In my perspective, that plausible statement is untenable as there is no direct and explicit link between world peace and female leaders.Some who harbor the view claim that existing female leaders like Merkel, the PM of Germany, have contributed tremendously to maintain regional politic stability and world peace. Nevertheless, while it is true that female leaders like Hillary Clinton have done so much on the peaceful world, people should not forget that this grand and strenuous goal was attained by millions of people's support, the lives of thousands of soldiers who sacrificed in the battleground like Afghanistan due to the fight against terrorism and the worldwide cooperation of governments by putting aside their differences. Apart from that, World peace is a target that no single leader, no matter that they are female or male, can achieve alone; it is a challenge that needs all individuals unite together and work in a long process. Consequently, ascribing the success to the number of female leaders is unreasonable.

However, that is not to say that female leaders could not contribute positively. To some extent, women are better than men in communication, which thanks to their natural talents, charms to opposite sex and distinguished ways to think comparing with males. But there is no convincing proof that the amount of female leader will diminish the violence, which is more likely to be controlled with powerful law system and so forth.

In summary, the number of females in the office do not have a clear correlation with the peace, and thus so absurd it is to reach a conclusion that more women in the office can reduce violence. In addition, to create a peaceful world requires every single citizen to partake in. The small effort we make, ultimately, will make a huge difference.
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