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[2017年] 短文改错:Sue and Ann often meet at a cheaper restaurant

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simplecen 发表于 2017-5-5 09:53:39 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Sue and Ann often meet at a cheaper restaurant to eat and talking about life and school after their morning class. Sometimes, instead of talking ,they play a game that they call it "people watching". They start the I ever worked as a tour guide. One day I saw advertisement on the newspaper. I rang up the company, and I was given the job immediate. They asked me to take a tour around the city the next morning. The manager just told me to say anything that I could think about the city. My first tour is terrible. The old bus was not air-conditioned, because it was the middle of summer. It was uncomfortable inside the bus. The tourist soon became very hot and angry. I owned a very hard time. I stayed there for a few weeks,and then left and joined in a better company. 
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Sue and Ann often meet at a cheap restaurant to eat and talk about life and school after their morning class. Sometimes, instead of talking ,they play a game that they call "people watching". They start when I ever worked as a tour guide. One day I saw advertisement on the newspaper. I rang up the company, and I was given the job immediately. They asked me to take a tour around the city the next morning. The manager just told me to say something that I could think about the city. My first tour was terrible. The old bus was not air-conditioned, and it was the middle summer. So it was uncomfortable inside the bus. The tourist soon became very hot and angry. I owned a very hard time. I stayed there for a few weeks,and then left and joined in a better company.
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